Iced Raktajino@startrek.website to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 1 month agoWhen you realize your laptop hasn't been plugged in for the last 4 hours you've been working...startrek.websiteimagemessage-square27fedilinkarrow-up151arrow-down12
arrow-up149arrow-down1imageWhen you realize your laptop hasn't been plugged in for the last 4 hours you've been working...startrek.websiteIced Raktajino@startrek.website to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 1 month agomessage-square27fedilink
minus-squareAliasVortex@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·1 month agoNot to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
minus-squareIced Raktajino@startrek.websiteOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·1 month agoNot really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.
Not to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
Not really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.